| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by A. Paige White on 10/11/06 at 03:53 AM Gorgeous! I bow in homage to your prowess at mastering a challenge... Wow... This piece is like shining silky locks flowing over the shoulder... |
| Posted by Kristine Briese on 12/19/06 at 04:24 PM Beautiful images, and a wonderful rhythm. Congratulations on POTD! |
| Posted by Gregory O'Neill on 12/20/06 at 02:22 AM Congrats on potd, Maria. Excellent choice. |
| Posted by Michelle Angelini on 12/20/06 at 03:39 AM CONGRATULATIONS on POTD! What a beautiful, romantic plea to the heavens. It's said with such delicacy that the universe can't help but listen. Often when I walk home and look up at the sky, I see my favorite constellation, Orion, and entreat him one more time.
~Chelle~ |
| Posted by Leslie Ann Eisenberg on 12/20/06 at 06:27 AM begging I
for you to lie -- that gets me right in the gut, sister...beautiful, and a great choice for POTD! PK
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| Posted by Kristina Woodhill on 12/26/06 at 11:15 PM I love reading the first stanza over and over! Nicely building to a perfect last line. |
