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We Fly Into Infinity

by Ashok Sharda


'Feel light'
Said my Love
Fly with me
Attaining new heights
Incomparable

High and high
Above all clouds
As there is no room
For clouds in our world
Nor for the heights
False and comparable

Known can't be compared
With the unknown
Beyond all the heights
And concepts

'We fly into infinity'
said my Love

05/17/2006

Posted on 10/07/2006
Copyright © 2021 Ashok Sharda

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Gregory O'Neill on 10/07/06 at 05:17 PM

Hello Ashok. You are one in infinity. There will never ever be another you no matter how far into the future - nor how far into the past - we look, and that makes each of us priceless beyond measure just the way we are. We all are - and we all forget - that's why we have each other. It's in the very reminding that we are reminded. Delighted with your poem. Thanks.

Posted by Quentin S Clingerman on 10/07/06 at 05:17 PM

Human love at its best touches the Infinite! You've expressed it, as usual, so very well.

Posted by Mara Meade on 10/08/06 at 01:36 AM

Known can't be compared
With the unknown
Beyond all the heights
And concepts
To share this kind of joy is... beyond words. This poem is exquisite in every facet.

Posted by Michelle Angelini on 10/08/06 at 03:48 AM

Flying, freedom, love, the clouds - unlimitless sky. A nice light touch here for something I hope I know before I die. At least I can relate to the unlimited possibilities of the sky, as compared to my imagination. Terrific - has my vote for POTD!
~Chelle~

Posted by Chris Sorrenti on 10/08/06 at 12:46 PM

Indeed we do. A worthy reminder to stay in the light as we fligh ever higher.

Posted by Elizabeth Jill on 10/08/06 at 01:09 PM

fresh flowing flying away from falsenesses into and above shadows joining in the lightness of honesty beautiful poem Ashok

Posted by Christel Crews on 10/09/06 at 02:15 AM

such a beautiful description of that feeling of new love, where nothing seems impossible and all you want to dwell in the stars

Posted by Maria Terezia Ferencz on 10/12/06 at 08:49 AM

Love the perfect 2 seat vessel for travel. I love the line about known being incomparable to unknown, perfect.

Posted by George Hoerner on 02/05/08 at 02:20 AM

Congratulation on POTD. So many of your pieces deserve to be in this category. Nice write.

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