| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Gregory O'Neill on 10/07/06 at 05:17 PM Hello Ashok. You are one in infinity. There will never ever be another you no matter how far into the future - nor how far into the past - we look, and that makes each of us priceless beyond measure just the way we are. We all are - and we all forget - that's why we have each other. It's in the very reminding that we are reminded.
Delighted with your poem. Thanks.
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| Posted by Quentin S Clingerman on 10/07/06 at 05:17 PM Human love at its best touches the Infinite! You've expressed it, as usual, so very well. |
| Posted by Mara Meade on 10/08/06 at 01:36 AM Known can't be compared
With the unknown
Beyond all the heights
And concepts
To share this kind of joy is... beyond words. This poem is exquisite in every facet. |
| Posted by Michelle Angelini on 10/08/06 at 03:48 AM Flying, freedom, love, the clouds - unlimitless sky. A nice light touch here for something I hope I know before I die. At least I can relate to the unlimited possibilities of the sky, as compared to my imagination. Terrific - has my vote for POTD!
~Chelle~ |
| Posted by Chris Sorrenti on 10/08/06 at 12:46 PM Indeed we do. A worthy reminder to stay in the light as we fligh ever higher. |
| Posted by Elizabeth Jill on 10/08/06 at 01:09 PM fresh flowing
flying away from falsenesses
into and above shadows
joining in the lightness of honesty
beautiful poem Ashok |
| Posted by Christel Crews on 10/09/06 at 02:15 AM such a beautiful description of that feeling of new love, where nothing seems impossible and all you want to dwell in the stars |
| Posted by Maria Terezia Ferencz on 10/12/06 at 08:49 AM Love the perfect 2 seat vessel for travel. I love the line about known being incomparable to unknown, perfect. |
| Posted by George Hoerner on 02/05/08 at 02:20 AM Congratulation on POTD. So many of your pieces deserve to be in this category. Nice write. |
