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the shining
by Laura Doomreflections decline
the harbour precarious
save this rising smile 10/06/2006 Posted on 10/06/2006
Copyright © 2025 Laura Doom
| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Chris Sorrenti on 10/06/06 at 05:32 PM Hope amidst the gloom; that's the impression I get from this one. A good example of how the shortest poems often have the most impact. Kudos! |
| Posted by Gregory O'Neill on 10/06/06 at 07:27 PM Sometimes we just must be this way. Is it self-preservation...or just what? I don't know, yet you have something here. Thanks. |
| Posted by Morgan D Hafele on 10/06/06 at 08:12 PM all i can really do is echo chris on this one. great read. |
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