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haiku (chill)

by David R Spellman

 
a chill autumn breeze
swirling through the orchard –
cinnamon and cider
 
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sunset
on the last day of summer –
chilled margaritas
 
 
 

09/14/2006

Author's Note: Entered in Pathetic's Tadpole Society's kukai for September '06 and needing to use the word "chill" or any of it's variations.

Posted on 10/04/2006
Copyright © 2024 David R Spellman

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Quentin S Clingerman on 10/06/06 at 01:23 AM

The first haiku especially good. Definite feel of Fall! I can taste that cider!

Posted by Chris Sorrenti on 10/07/06 at 12:21 PM

Pretty good David. Both effectively capture the season, and a great way to celebrate those sunsets!

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