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Waiting for the other shoe to drop

by Lacy D Phillips

Left Shoe:

assigning value to the SELF
I am nothing but the intersection of preferences
blogging my way into oblivion
the machinery of my memory congeals into valueless GREY
even a VOID is whole
all words can be shamed by an IMAGE
all images can be found devoid of MEANING
for you I would be charm embodied, grace and all your valued traits
Datta. Damyata. Dayadhvam.

 

Right Shoe:

manumission of the SOUL
instantly and irrevocably I attained your STILLNESS
the stillness of falling at terminal velocity
in search of existence
validation is internal
INSIDE I have nothing but PROSE
my gift of inches transposed to MILES
silence stings like salted wounds more than my many words

09/28/2006

Author's Note: I have a pair of grey pumps that are in terrible condition, but I just don't want to let them go because they're so formed to my foot and dainty. So I broked out my Sharpie and went to town. Now my favorite grey pumps boast my favorite lines. And I get such a kick out of quoting myself, I stole lines from my own works. I'll take some pics and post them soon.

Posted on 09/28/2006
Copyright © 2024 Lacy D Phillips

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Charlie Morgan on 09/30/06 at 03:31 AM

...lacy, detail is one of the most powerful poetic nuances and in this left shoe right shoe thingee, was just that...they're shoes but you gave them so much more...peace, chaz

Posted by Julie Adams on 10/02/06 at 04:03 PM

what an intruiging piece, the breakdown of left and right, the self and the soul...the movement almost tantric...the title feels classic and the author's note is great too...hope u don't mind my comments, after so long away from the site...all the best to you, jewels

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