| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Maria Terezia Ferencz on 09/26/06 at 01:59 PM I like the personification of Autumn here, to see her this way is just so on the money. Brought to mind a Mucha litho I love. |
| Posted by A. Paige White on 09/26/06 at 05:46 PM Loved this! She leaned on me around 3:00 this a.m.... and whispered through the open window "snuggle your comforter!"
and so i did. Thanks. |
| Posted by Gregory O'Neill on 09/26/06 at 09:03 PM Ha! Yes, Chaz, Autumn seems to refuse to every committment! |
| Posted by Rusty C Arquette on 09/26/06 at 10:41 PM You think you'd learn Chuck, she does this to you every year! (snicker) - Poor RCat, I'm Knee deep in Florida sand...not leaves; Brrr! It's 87 today..and sunny! Too bad, eh? (chuckle) |
| Posted by Dave Fitzgerald on 09/27/06 at 02:54 PM I agree with Maria, love the idea of autumn being a person. Great write Charlie, love the style |
| Posted by Quentin S Clingerman on 09/28/06 at 02:43 PM Great use of personification. Sense the reluctant acceptance of the changing of the season in the "slinking" expression. I thoroughly enjoy autumn myself. |
| Posted by Lacy D Phillips on 09/28/06 at 07:08 PM Brilliant! |
| Posted by Mary Ellen Smith on 09/30/06 at 02:38 AM I could feel fall in the wee hours of the morning as well and then it did heat up here. Soon perhaps she will stay for awhile. Love this...made me smile. |
| Posted by Michelle Angelini on 09/30/06 at 03:17 AM Too bad the site doesn't have the featured poet anymore, you'd make a great one. Your poetry is so varied and interesting. As the others have noted, your personification of autumn is terrific. I love SoCal, but miss the change of seasons. Thanks for the reminder.
~Chelle~ |
