I hope you have a better tomorrow with a sunrise. by Bob ArcaniaToday your world
Loomed where it should have
rested, woken on your
shoulder, opened its eyelashes there
on your sleeve.
I told you this.
While holding your rose petalled
hands, and I knew I wished for
them to be not so damp,
I told you this.
I cupped your dandelion
Ears between my dewy
Fingers and blew your
Seeds onto your shoulders.
This is how I told you this.
You said thank you.
Thank you, but I am
fine. I said nonsense. You cocked
your head like a pistol,
and I saw your bullet
loaded in your tonsils.
I shuddered with the weight.
Positively sank within each
Of my ribs, not even large
Enough to fill
My chest.
I shuddered
With the weight of
Your crosshair. 09/14/2006 Author's Note: Edited November 24
Posted on 09/15/2006 Copyright © 2024 Bob Arcania
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Posted by Kristina Woodhill on 08/06/18 at 11:36 PM "You cocked
your head like a pistol,
and I saw your bullet
loaded in your tonsils." I had to sign in just to go "WOW!" about these lines. and that last stanza. Powerful stuff - fantastic images.
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Posted by Brian Fuchs on 08/30/18 at 06:13 PM This is fantastic! |
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