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Hey You! Rebel with no real cause...
by Kristi PaikI never asked you if you missed me
Yet you felt so compelled to say it
I never asked you to say you care
I preferred you didnt say it
I never asked you to make me care
And somehow you made me anyway
My heart is a door locked tight and sealed
But you managed to find the doggie door
I never asked you inside
But here you are smoking my pot
And strumming my guitar
I never asked you to say you still love me
Hell I even said never lie to me again
09/11/2006 Posted on 09/11/2006
Copyright © 2024 Kristi Paik
| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Joan Serratelli on 09/12/06 at 11:11 AM Wonderful Kristi- I love the way you deal with this situation. I also like the short stanzas and the ending. Excellent write! |
| Posted by Gabriel Ricard on 12/07/06 at 08:51 PM You know, I don't think you need that second line in the second to last stanza. I really don't. But that's just me. The rest of it's great, wonderfully honest stuff. |
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