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haiku (wanderers)

watching the wind play
across the pond’s surface –
a wandering old man

09/02/2006

Posted on 09/07/2006
Copyright © 2024 David R Spellman

Member Comments on this Poem

Posted by Quentin S Clingerman on 09/09/06 at 03:05 PM

I could immediately relate! Stimulating imagery!

Posted by Leslie Ann Eisenberg on 09/09/06 at 06:43 PM

such a lovely flow, awandering so. PK

Posted by Melissa Arel on 09/09/06 at 11:46 PM

love it.

Posted by Christina Bruno on 09/10/06 at 11:55 PM

this is what haiku is about...vivid, amazing

Posted by Kate Demeree on 09/11/06 at 01:22 PM

I sit here smiling... you do have a way of painting mind pictures. I really like your wandering imagry!

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