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9-1

by Ava Blu

almost forgot
to remember to start:

it was always the way your looks
dug into me that I couldn't
forgive.

09/03/2006

Author's Note: freshstartfreshstart startfresh

Posted on 09/04/2006
Copyright © 2024 Ava Blu

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Shonda Creemer on 09/04/06 at 04:06 AM

I too missed these...

Posted by Ashok Sharda on 09/05/06 at 02:25 AM

Yes, associations are reminders. Energy providers too.

Posted by Rula Shin on 09/05/06 at 09:04 PM

Yes, we do make conscious resolves which nature tends to steer us away from, distracting us from our reminders. One suggestion, maybe you could begin with the 2nd stanza and end with the first as the point of return? Just a thought, nicely done :-)

Posted by Kyle Anne Kish on 09/05/06 at 10:28 PM

Short-lyrical-journal-like-poems. I like it. I like it a lot. ~~ Kyle Anne

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