almost forgot to remember to start: it was always the way your looks dug into me that I couldn't forgive.
09/03/2006
Posted on 09/04/2006Copyright © 2024 Ava Blu
I too missed these...
Yes, associations are reminders. Energy providers too.
Yes, we do make conscious resolves which nature tends to steer us away from, distracting us from our reminders. One suggestion, maybe you could begin with the 2nd stanza and end with the first as the point of return? Just a thought, nicely done :-)
Short-lyrical-journal-like-poems. I like it. I like it a lot. ~~ Kyle Anne