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Diner of Expectations

by Jayme L Helmick

Your patronizing is exquisite

I dine on my bleeding heart
Sip the wine of failure
Savoring each tear-filled flavor
I roll the bitterness under my tongue
Hold the indiscretion against
My broken palate

And I wonder how I got to this table
again
Using the yeast of uncertainty to
Bake the cake of my demise
Only to watch it collapse
Into a heap of ashes

Dry as the earth in my mouth

You failed to pay the hopeful bill
I handed to you
And maybe you can't
Being bankrupt at your own buffet
I only wish I'd known that
Before I let you feast on me

Because the tip you left
Won't get me through the day

Perhaps I'm just a snob
Expecting the best in these
Dining delights
(Or maybe I'm too optimistic)
And I have to admit
I wouldn't take the meal back
if I could

I just wish I got the recipe
for your mind
Before I checked out of mine


08/26/2006

Posted on 08/26/2006
Copyright © 2024 Jayme L Helmick

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by A. Paige White on 08/26/06 at 07:20 PM

I got from this, something read was seen as patronizing a meal of sorrow and it made you lose your mind? is that right? I love how it flowed, but just not completely sure how it connects... it's another fuzzy slippers thinking day though, so it slips away in that fog nicely. Enjoyed it.

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Posted by Kristina Woodhill on 08/27/06 at 12:04 AM

Well done! Great ending!!

Posted by Tim D Livingston on 08/31/06 at 06:38 AM

Nicely done Jamal.

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