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busy man

by Charlie Morgan



i’m ready to retire, i got plenty to do.
there’s folks that say you retire
and then bore yourself to death.
i got
no time for being bored;
i’m a very busy man worrying
each day


away.

08/19/2006

Posted on 08/19/2006
Copyright © 2024 Charlie Morgan

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Glenn Currier on 08/20/06 at 03:23 AM

The poem makes me sad for some reason... wasting away the days with worry. I sure wish I could say I never did THAT! But I am glad I can say I don't do it mearly as much as I used to... glad I lived long enough to say that. Anyway, I can see you in the first 5 lines. But somehow I DON'T THINK, should you ever reach the big R, you will be wasting your days away. Your economy of words is amazing. It is so cool to see you getting better as a poet... especially when you were already fantastic.

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