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revive her?

by Charlie Morgan



she was done.
a pall of ataraxia sheathed
her deep fissures of worry;
tÂ’was not calmness
but apathy that stung
all reaching hands.

08/17/2006

Posted on 08/17/2006
Copyright © 2025 Charlie Morgan

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Shonda Chrissonberry on 08/18/06 at 01:29 AM

it is way to easy to give up isn't it?

Posted by Shonda Chrissonberry on 08/18/06 at 01:34 AM

ooops ~ to should be too, left an "o" out ~ promise i is edgumacated lol

Posted by Maria Terezia Ferencz on 08/18/06 at 07:50 AM

Yes....apathy burns, you can see the difference that most ignore, nicely done.

Posted by Kristina Woodhill on 08/19/06 at 02:09 PM

hmmm, well done, from the titled question to the most excellent ending - "apathy that stung all reaching hands". What does one do with apathy?

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