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scents of night
by Peter Humphreysas you
breathe
gently
raven
hair
askew
your
breasts
do rise
and lips
do call
my name
Erris
upon the
evening
air
that
glides
in through
a window
bare and
carries
with it
scents of
night
and past
deceipts
as
wrongs
set right
a
bulky
browed
barn owl
preys
for
home
08/14/2006 Posted on 08/14/2006
Copyright © 2024 Peter Humphreys
| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Dave Fitzgerald on 08/14/06 at 06:56 PM love the last bit "a bulky browed barn owl preys for home"
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| Posted by Maria Terezia Ferencz on 08/15/06 at 01:01 AM Very nice sense you have made of this...sexy it was to me...nice |
| Posted by Kristina Woodhill on 08/15/06 at 03:20 AM "upon the
evening
air
that
glides
in through
a window
bare and
carries
with it
scents of
night"
lovely words and flow - the barn owl at the end is great... |
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