Member Comments on this Poem |
Posted by Maria Terezia Ferencz on 08/07/06 at 01:42 AM I do this, but could never have put it so brilliantly....I love this one, into favorites it goes. |
Posted by Vere Mantratriad on 08/10/06 at 05:04 AM Absolutely lovely...I love both the idea and the execution. Very well done. :) |
Posted by Deborah Breuer on 04/27/07 at 10:57 PM A great write. As poets, we all think this but it's hard to put the concept into words, at least ones that taste so good. Congrats, and be proud.
Debbie |
Posted by Rowan Luis on 05/03/07 at 10:39 PM wow, this is just so vivid, i love it. it makes me taste the honey and want to hear such words. the imagary is brilliant. |
Posted by JD Clay on 05/19/07 at 01:16 PM Now there is some chewy stuff! Killer first stanza but every line worth savoring. Congratulations on becoming The Passionate Poet Of The Day. |
Posted by Kyle Anne Kish on 05/19/07 at 03:38 PM "... i eat your words and am filled" ... such a fitting ending. Your running descriptions and emotions had me from the first line. Beautifully written and I think we can all relate in one way or another. Congratulations on your POTD. Well deserved.
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Posted by Kerowyn Rose on 08/04/12 at 02:55 PM This gave me shivers... it is going in my favorites. :-) Thanks for sharing! |