Member Comments on this Poem |
Posted by Kristina Woodhill on 08/02/06 at 03:14 AM I really like how the word Love is centered in this poem as you talk about its place in your life. |
Posted by Ashok Sharda on 08/02/06 at 03:34 AM My my, is it the life epitomizing poetry or is it the poetry that epitomizes life, with love occupying the center space,’ ever present’? Instead of all the moods, love provides it serenity.
This is divine love, you have in the epicenter, the source of all joy, all beauty, and this euphoric BLISS. Yes, Love is the essence of poetry and so is of LIFE. This is beautiful.
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Posted by Maria Terezia Ferencz on 08/02/06 at 04:49 AM This is the way to live, if only we could all do this. What a wonderful place this would be. |
Posted by Maria Terezia Ferencz on 08/02/06 at 04:50 AM oops forgot to mention I also admire how love is in the center, of the poem and in you. |
Posted by Gregory O'Neill on 08/02/06 at 05:22 AM Hi Rula. Yes, serene and peaceful...but this has ENERGY! Way to go. Thanks. |
Posted by Cole Bradburn on 08/02/06 at 05:53 AM i have always enjoyed your use of CAPS, and I have to agree with the comments about love (unconditional love, grace, etc...) at the center. unique, concise, wonderful |
Posted by Elizabeth Jill on 08/02/06 at 12:11 PM What Maria ~Angelina~ Massarella said... —yes, me too! And the beauty of your spirit that backgrounds this poem with complete pure sincere LOVE! |
Posted by Jared Fladeland on 08/02/06 at 03:50 PM how beautiful, to live your life in such a way |
Posted by Michelle Angelini on 08/06/06 at 01:49 AM Rula, this poem states so simply the source of so much of our creativity. Yet sometimes with my poetry, I wonder if the resulting poem comes from love or I love the creation because of what inspires the poem. Either way, love is present.
~Chelle~ |