| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by David R Spellman on 07/30/06 at 03:53 PM This is absolutely spellbinding and so wonderfully intense and touching. Loved all of the phrasings and descriptions, especially "no sound loud enough to silence the melody of him." An excellent write --- into favorites!
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| Posted by Ashok Sharda on 07/31/06 at 03:00 AM 'awakening the one within'...yes, with the touch of refined energies vibrating from one to the other, creating a magnetic field, merging not only the space and time on the without but also creates an inner unity.This is beautiful.
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| Posted by Kristina Woodhill on 07/31/06 at 01:55 PM I love how you've explored the different senses in this! |
| Posted by Charles M Harrison on 08/01/06 at 10:42 AM There is nothing to compare to the touch of one we love. Good stuff here. |
| Posted by David R Spellman on 09/19/06 at 09:01 AM I echo Maria's sentiments - it was great to find this as POTD and to read it again. Very beautiful still - Congrats! |
| Posted by JD Clay on 09/19/06 at 05:40 PM This intricate piece expands well beyond mere touch. It ignites every expremity with refinement. Congratulations on becoming The Poet Of The Day.
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| Posted by Gregory O'Neill on 09/19/06 at 06:36 PM ....awake is merely an ersatz dream. Congrats on a fine potd. |
| Posted by Charlie Morgan on 09/19/06 at 06:45 PM ...maria, congrats on POTD, very well deserved, you are one writing queen, touche! annnd on random picks is one by me ABOUT YOU, titled 'she causes a feeling', totally about you...bowing to your queen-ness...peace, chaz |
| Posted by Michelle Angelini on 09/20/06 at 06:58 AM Beautiful and sensitive Maria. Congratulations on POTD!
~Chelle~ |
