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the poet

by Jared Fladeland

too dreem like poe-ets do
u mawst furst look b yawnd wurds.



and then you must put them into language.

07/22/2006

Posted on 07/22/2006
Copyright © 2024 Jared Fladeland

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Heide McAlister-Bates on 07/22/06 at 03:49 PM

*thunderous applause*

Posted by Rula Shin on 07/22/06 at 04:06 PM

Indeed, no word can EVER BE the difinitive experience. What is a translation but a translation? To BE one must BE. What a truly creative way to express the unexpressable...for they are only tools in our hands that enable us to express, while experience alone allows us to communicate, wordless. Wonderfully meaningful piece.

Posted by A. Paige White on 07/22/06 at 06:47 PM

lolololol*_*... I loved this! Hey! You must be from Mississippi too! This piece has that hometown accent... Thanks for the laughs.. Good to read our sounds...

Posted by Kristina Woodhill on 07/22/06 at 07:20 PM

So very true!! Well done!

Posted by Ashok Sharda on 07/23/06 at 02:23 AM

Yes, beyond words and let the scene choose words to manifest. The clarity of the scene will some how express not just the scene but also the intensity of the experiencers BEING.

Posted by Amanda L Marron on 07/24/06 at 07:44 PM

:) Excellent :)

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