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seven years in tibet*
by Vere MantratriadI praise to you
whether you want it or not
and its a difficult impression
to leave on your face when
youre trying so hard
not to see yourself
but the mirror is inside
and wont dislodge
from your grey matter
no matter the matter
07/21/2006 Author's Note: *david bowie - title and "I praise to you" line
Posted on 07/22/2006
Copyright © 2024 Vere Mantratriad
| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Junemarie Roldan on 07/22/06 at 03:13 AM So few words for so much said. I'm so jealous of you Vere, that I'm begining to look like Kermit (ribit)lol. You ROCK!!!
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| Posted by Chris Sorrenti on 07/23/06 at 05:10 PM A great movie also if I'm not mistaken, with Brad Pitt. I like the open hearted honesty of this piece, and especially the aliteration in the last few lines. |
| Posted by Christel Crews on 07/26/06 at 04:56 AM a great use of wording here.. those last few lines really drive it home |
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