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i drive fast

by Emily Davidson

i drive fast
because i see your car
pull out of the parking lot
a minute before
i get to mine, so i
buckle my seat belt and
tear out of there,
with a fire in me

i drive fast
because i miss you
already and wish
you wanted
to touch
the way i do

i drive fast
because i want to
be near you
and push the hair
out of your face
smiling, thinking,
i've got you
right where i want you

i drive fast
because i hope to
catch you at a red light
and glance into the other lane
saying,
"well, look who it is."

07/20/2006

Posted on 07/20/2006
Copyright © 2024 Emily Davidson

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Kristina Woodhill on 07/21/06 at 04:17 AM

I like!!!

Posted by Ginette T Belle on 07/21/06 at 01:40 PM

love the last stanza...the whole poem has a great vibe, nice flow...very enticing

Posted by Heide McAlister-Bates on 07/22/06 at 04:53 PM

Nicely formed, good flow. I like this.

Posted by Vere Mantratriad on 07/23/06 at 01:32 AM

I've been down that road... I dig this.

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