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a brief deconstruction in the form of household items and space
by Jared Fladelandyour:
dixie cup smile amuses me every time.
poker chip eyes have me wanting to push all in on every hand.
cinnamon bun nose ponders the aroma filling the air.
bearskin hair wraps around me and I snuggle into eternity.
if personality were a million miles,
I would, without hesitation walk your
2,004,336,482,622 light years of nuances
to enjoy every moment of who you are. 07/05/2006 Posted on 07/05/2006
Copyright © 2024 Jared Fladeland
| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Michelle Angelini on 07/05/06 at 05:25 PM Derrida was never one of my favorites until I learned to understand his theory. You've taken what so common and elevated it to the heights of sometimes undefined and not often understood love. Welcome to pathetic - a bit late... ;-)
~Chelle~ |
| Posted by Kristina Woodhill on 07/05/06 at 07:40 PM This is terrific!! |
| Posted by Sandy M. Humphrey on 07/05/06 at 09:16 PM Great use of metaphor in the common everyday you find the most wonderful things to say about someone special. smh |
| Posted by Vere Mantratriad on 07/08/06 at 03:47 PM I would have liked to have seen this longer...to see what other tribute you could devise...but considering this is "a brief deconstruction"... that wouldn't quite fit, would it? :) All in all, a very thoughtful and nice write. |
| Posted by Steven Kenworthy on 03/14/07 at 03:37 AM wow...this is insanely intimate. this is the embodiment of romance. this is how it's supposed to be. it's the subtle things that set those who are truly in love on fire. the "nuances"...are where the true beauty hides. VERY excellent jared. |
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