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it is necessary to keep quiet

by Emily Davidson

i have never had to
hide
how i felt
about anything
before

but when you decide you're
sort of, kind of, just a little bit
in love
with a woman who you shouldn't be with
for more reasons than you can count on your
fingers and toes,
it is necessary to keep quiet

but she makes me
want to sing
and scream
and laugh
and cry

none of which are quiet actions

so at night
when the world sleeps
i make all the noise i want
and keep quiet
in daylight

06/28/2006

Posted on 06/29/2006
Copyright © 2024 Emily Davidson

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Chris Sorrenti on 06/29/06 at 06:41 PM

Profound expression. Message (quietly) sent out loud n' clear.

Posted by Kathleen Wilson on 06/30/06 at 07:07 PM

Finely expressed as well, I do agree with Michael...the subtle she is good...and comes across...

Posted by Peter Humphreys on 07/01/06 at 08:28 AM

I love this poem, Emily. It is so true, tender and it made me smile. A favourite.

Posted by Richard Vince on 03/07/13 at 08:37 PM

yes. very true. if only i could have back all the time i've spent holding my metaphorical tongue over the years. this is lovely. :)

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