by A. Paige White

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What a negative development
this turned out to be.
We look so good, incandescent
Inside out, we bee.

Not a negative development
this turned in to bee.
It needs no sweet embellishment;
beauty is set free.

Got a negative development?
Tell now, So do we!
Unroll the film by increment
So the viewed can see.

Plot a negative development
Dotted i, crossed t.
Draw a map with wordy content
Let's see you and me!


Author's Note:

Posted on 06/28/2006
Copyright © 2023 A. Paige White

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Cole Miller on 07/07/06 at 05:58 AM

i am stunned, this is an amazing piece.

Posted by P.T. Brooks on 12/16/06 at 06:25 PM

touche -pt

Posted by Maria Francesca on 07/25/07 at 03:02 AM

I love how you play with the words! new favorite! -maria.

Posted by Philip F De Pinto on 06/03/10 at 12:11 PM

poems as snapshots seems to develop out of the dark or the negative into their positivity and this poem is no exception. this poem turned out to bee some splendid reading and worthwhile and thoughtful.

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