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Cigarettes and Velocity

by Mary J Anna

Phase TwO

You You, You
I
I – I

You are beastly beautiful
and I embrace the night
I embrace the You that’s You
the darkness of your eyes

I
You
I

You can feel the shining
of the darkness of your mind
You can make me You like I
and You and I unite

Raphael wears masks of must
and You and I unite to trust.
The darkness holds the key to night
that made the light shine ever bright
and now the more of You and You
make You and I tonight
tonight
to fight
I

I
You

and very well we do…
for you
All I find is you to bite
the night that made the darkness bright.
I
I
I
I
You’re Hollow the tree of trite that once was Loving E’very Knight.
Oh You. Oh You.
Love me like you used to do,
so warmth is remembered from the cold -
so you do? so you do. and dont While I am.

06/27/2006

Author's Note: Velociraptor Veloci-rap-e-tor where are dinasours? in our plastic? and why am I thinking so much about yams when I read this? I'm a wierd-o D: or (weeee!) :] hmmm :)

Posted on 06/27/2006
Copyright © 2024 Mary J Anna

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by A. Paige White on 07/04/06 at 02:50 AM

This is great, I loved how you write. And Cole's comment had me rolling with laughter. "smited them dead", it makes my stomach clench in anticipated return to the guffaws... I do so appreciate this community talented writers. Great job!

Posted by Chris Sorrenti on 07/07/06 at 01:24 PM

What a captivating fun read, despite its serious message. Clever, worthy set up of words, rhyme and rhythm to deliver the goods. Refreshingly different...well done!

Posted by Gregory O'Neill on 12/04/06 at 07:13 AM

Enjoyed the read. Thanks very much.

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