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Her Emotions

by Keith D Allison

Tonight
You made me laugh …
And cry at the same time

Within
Clouds of the gray
You did care!

That sparkle with the eyes
I’m right
Gently tugs and upon the strings

Caught in the moment
In the gentle wind
Where the rhapsody glows

06/25/2006

Posted on 06/25/2006
Copyright © 2022 Keith D Allison

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Christel Crews on 06/25/06 at 08:30 PM

you know, its very difficult to make someone laugh and cry at the same time :) this is an excellent piece, beautiful and heartfelt

Posted by Steven Kenworthy on 06/26/06 at 03:41 AM

often times the sign of a fantastic poet is how much they can say with such few words. here you've done that keith with your heart warming and honest imagery. laughing and crying at the same time is such an emotional perplexity/rush. powerful write...good stuff.

Posted by Michelle Angelini on 06/26/06 at 04:10 AM

She must be one special lady to evoke words like this - and have someone think about her this way. Beautiful and tender.
~Chelle~

Posted by Chris Sorrenti on 06/27/06 at 04:31 PM

Very sweet and romantically beautiful Keith. Thanks for sharing this, and nice to see it on the top 10.

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