Her Emotions by Keith D Allison Tonight You made me laugh And cry at the same time Within Clouds of the gray You did care! That sparkle with the eyes I’m right Gently tugs and upon the strings Caught in the moment In the gentle wind Where the rhapsody glows 06/25/2006 Posted on 06/25/2006 Copyright © 2025 Keith D Allison Member Comments on this Poem Posted by Christel Crews on 06/25/06 at 08:30 PM you know, its very difficult to make someone laugh and cry at the same time :) this is an excellent piece, beautiful and heartfelt Posted by Steven Kenworthy on 06/26/06 at 03:41 AM often times the sign of a fantastic poet is how much they can say with such few words. here you've done that keith with your heart warming and honest imagery. laughing and crying at the same time is such an emotional perplexity/rush. powerful write...good stuff. Posted by Michelle Angelini on 06/26/06 at 04:10 AM She must be one special lady to evoke words like this - and have someone think about her this way. Beautiful and tender. ~Chelle~ Posted by Chris Sorrenti on 06/27/06 at 04:31 PM Very sweet and romantically beautiful Keith. Thanks for sharing this, and nice to see it on the top 10. Return to the Previous Page   pathetic.org Version 7.3.2 May 2004 Terms and Conditions of Use 0 member(s) and 2 visitor(s) online All works Copyright © 2025 their respective authors. Page Generated In 0 Second(s)