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snip, slice, sever
by Christel Crews
Two blades meet
Severing
The tie of
Something
That should have
Occurred
Sometime
Ago
...
06/18/2006
Author's Note: just something that was running through my mind tonight.. nothing fancy, just an image that i had to scribble about
Posted on 06/19/2006
Copyright © 2024 Christel Crews
| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Vere Mantratriad on 06/19/06 at 04:10 AM Don't you love the ones that you just HAVE to get out? You know, this really ties in with your balloon piece for me. Flying free. :) |
| Posted by Chris Sorrenti on 06/21/06 at 04:20 PM Yikes! Sounds like a vasectomy. I especially like the impact of the first two lines. |
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