Member Comments on this Poem |
Posted by Christel Crews on 06/20/06 at 09:12 PM questions that plague lovers are universal.. a beautiful piece |
Posted by Vere Mantratriad on 06/21/06 at 05:50 AM To end with a bang... |
Posted by Chris Sorrenti on 06/24/06 at 02:57 PM Et tu bruté? Well done Peter, taking us back to Roman times, reminding me of a line from the movie Patton, which supposedly came from a Roman servant: "All glory is fleeting." |
Posted by Mara Meade on 06/25/06 at 07:44 PM Ahhh... the picture this brings us...
Beautifully written. |
Posted by Gregory O'Neill on 06/26/06 at 12:31 AM ...when in Rome, eh? Who would want this to ever end? Great images, Peter. |
Posted by Joan Serratelli on 06/28/06 at 05:35 PM Great images, great poem. I agree with everyone. This sounds like how it begins. Wonderful job! |
Posted by Elizabeth Jill on 06/29/06 at 01:21 PM yes! |