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Return to your manhole!
by Vere Mantratriadwhen I'm having a
pleasant
un-dream
and you bring me
back to your
attitude
where you
divide my tide
from coming in
I crack
under your pressure
leaving me with
thoughts of
tearing through
your skin
only to find
what's underneath
is bone laced
with sin
06/15/2006 Author's Note: For L's raw sewage people. :P
ha
Posted on 06/16/2006
Copyright © 2024 Vere Mantratriad
| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Bob Arcania on 06/16/06 at 05:30 AM Love, love, love "divide my tide/from coming in" and "is bone laced/with sin" lines. The line breaks help it all to pack a nice punch, too. |
| Posted by Chris Sorrenti on 06/16/06 at 04:38 PM HA! Great title. I couldn't help but fall into the poem. Who is L and what Sewage People??? |
| Posted by Christel Crews on 06/19/06 at 03:07 AM love the title!!! love the imagery and yes, who are the sewage people? |
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