futures by Peter Humphreyscool
water
gushing
from
stunted
tap
glass
house
hot and
humid
shade
languid
lily
pond
fish
dip
fish
dart
vines
tethered
tortured
trained
belayed
you
kissed
me
our
futures
made 06/09/2006 Posted on 06/09/2006 Copyright © 2024 Peter Humphreys
Member Comments on this Poem |
Posted by Christel Crews on 06/09/06 at 11:30 PM you set it up and then knock us all down with that last amazing phrase! |
Posted by Kristina Woodhill on 06/09/06 at 11:46 PM You are a master at short stanzas that still paint full scenes for me. Great build up and ending. |
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