| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Christel Crews on 06/09/06 at 11:33 PM its so easy to get lost in the moment when you are there.. lost in your lover's presence.. any move becomes a jolt.. beautiful descriptions!! |
| Posted by Kristina Woodhill on 06/14/06 at 01:52 PM Quite remarkable - I can feel the dream-like serenity of your mind and that moment's break in the continuity of it. |
| Posted by Joan Serratelli on 06/19/06 at 12:29 PM Love the wonderful and very vivid images. This piece is beautiful from start to finish. |
| Posted by Gregory O'Neill on 06/20/06 at 02:54 PM A most subtle startle! Excellent, Peter. |
| Posted by Elizabeth Jill on 06/23/06 at 06:17 AM wonderful! wonderful! wonderful!
I, too, love this series.
You are the sigh of a good-morning's kiss-with-words, Peter Humphreys! Your poetry mesmerizes!
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| Posted by Mara Meade on 06/25/06 at 07:49 PM To find such peace with your hand in the hand of your Beloved... this is so gentle. |
