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boys are inanimate objects, yet keep moving me

by Vere Mantratriad


I keep an empty suit of armor
at the foot of my bed
as though it were a symbol
of some period in my life
or a protector standing watch
ready to stand and fight
until he is rust
disintegrated and useless

I keep an empty suit of armor
at the foot of my bed
as a loaner kept on hand
searching for the one to fit
slash the demons that guard me
throw me over his shoulder
like a trophy
slung over his horse's haunches

I keep an empty suit of armor
at the foot of my bed
as a morbid decoration
like a stuffed deer
to hang on the wall
purchased at a garage sale
to make you think
that I've ended my search

06/07/2006

Author's Note: Since so many people have questioned the connection between the title and the poem... the best way I can put it, is that boys and the suit of armor are interchangeable. As in, whether it's an actual person or a hunk of metal, they still serve the same purpose.
Which may or may not only make sense in my discombobulated excuse for a mind.

work in progress

I like the idea, I just don't think I've executed it very well.

Posted on 06/08/2006
Copyright © 2025 Vere Mantratriad

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Joan Serratelli on 06/08/06 at 11:05 AM

I agree- I think this is excellent as it is. I especially like the visual images here.

Posted by Christel Crews on 06/09/06 at 11:20 PM

um, can i say "amen".. this is incredible! i love the idea and i love the imagery and i think you did a wonderful job getting your point across.. i agree though, the title is not connected to the piece.. just a thought :)

Posted by Heide McAlister-Bates on 06/15/06 at 10:03 AM

Love the title, love the poem, and I do see a connection. I like the repetition, the way it ties the stanzas together. Nice write.

Posted by Kristina Woodhill on 06/15/06 at 03:58 PM

Just a terrific premise! You could add more stanzas, but I think this stands alone quite well. Really enjoyable to read and re-read. The title - hmmm - not sure about that part; I have to agree with others that it is not connected.

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