Member Comments on this Poem |
Posted by Michelle Angelini on 06/07/06 at 03:39 AM Christel, this is just beautiful - sad and emotional. That guy should have both eyes blackened ;-) for leaving.
~Chelle~ |
Posted by Vere Mantratriad on 06/08/06 at 02:37 AM I can't tell you how often I've thought about these kinds of moments. I love the strength that forces its way through this. These little things can be so huge. |
Posted by Mary Ellen Smith on 06/08/06 at 04:28 AM so sad...heartbreaking really. |
Posted by Vimal Rony on 06/09/06 at 10:00 AM Beautiful substance, romantically woven! |
Posted by Tim D Livingston on 06/10/06 at 05:43 AM Breathtaking. I find that deep inside I still have feelings for girls I dated in the past. Sometimes it never goes away. My wife knows and it's not like I sit here and dwell on it. We all have fragments of former loves. I was reading Tuesdays with Morrie and he said the same thing. Just because you're older doesn't mean those feelings are gone. So the statement in your final stanza will probably remain true. |
Posted by Chris Sorrenti on 01/18/07 at 07:28 PM Worthy twist to the "dream lover" concept! |