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Cambridge moments

by Peter Humphreys

air white
seeds
on waters
still

black swan
gander
goslings
quill

tendrils
hanging
lime trees
green

care free
punters
being
seen

summer sun
thrumming
meadows
yellow

collie dog
chasing
silly
fellow

college
towers
fleeting
hours

Cambridge moments




06/03/2006

Posted on 06/03/2006
Copyright © 2024 Peter Humphreys

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Gregory O'Neill on 06/03/06 at 10:40 PM

Hi Peter. The rhythm of your stanzas keep the time well in this piece. Enjoyed this!

Posted by Elizabeth Jill on 06/04/06 at 03:38 PM

Don't tell anyone, but I love rhymes and the people who make them happen!

Posted by Christel Crews on 06/04/06 at 04:12 PM

an excellent piece which could be the defining work of what poetry is.. rhyme and rhythm all intertwined into a beautiful verse that picks the reader up and carries them away to some far off place just for a moment of serenity :)

Posted by Chris Sorrenti on 06/05/06 at 04:36 PM

Nifty combination of style and vocabulary Peter. Kudos!

Posted by George Hoerner on 06/29/18 at 01:51 AM

one of my favorite places in England

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