Pathetic.org  
 

Without

by Charles J Hannan

soul stupified
swiss cheese entrance
no exit
a maze of confusion
raining
forget me nots forgotten
mistified and transparent
embracing rhythm
without drums
and souls

05/25/2006

Posted on 05/25/2006
Copyright © 2025 Charles J Hannan

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Dave Fitzgerald on 09/15/06 at 01:30 PM

Excellent write, Congrats on POTD

Posted by Kristina Woodhill on 09/15/06 at 02:21 PM

A fine POTD! I agree with Bethany - very satisfying!

Posted by JD Clay on 09/16/06 at 02:50 AM

This is good stuff. I especially like the brevity of your POTD. I says just enough to pacify the reader with an open-endedness that genuinely supports the title.

Return to the Previous Page
 

pathetic.org Version 7.3.2 May 2004 Terms and Conditions of Use 0 member(s) and 2 visitor(s) online
All works Copyright © 2025 their respective authors. Page Generated In 0 Second(s)