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Without by Charles J Hannansoul stupified
swiss cheese entrance
no exit
a maze of confusion
raining
forget me nots forgotten
mistified and transparent
embracing rhythm
without drums
and souls 05/25/2006 Posted on 05/25/2006 Copyright © 2025 Charles J Hannan
| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Dave Fitzgerald on 09/15/06 at 01:30 PM Excellent write, Congrats on POTD |
| Posted by Kristina Woodhill on 09/15/06 at 02:21 PM A fine POTD! I agree with Bethany - very satisfying! |
| Posted by JD Clay on 09/16/06 at 02:50 AM This is good stuff. I especially like the brevity of your POTD. I says just enough to pacify the reader with an open-endedness that genuinely supports the title.
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