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In (Con)sequence

by Maureen Glaude

the heart breaks
first, then
the lungs collapse

05/15/2006

Author's Note: just a thought and a draft

Posted on 05/15/2006
Copyright © 2021 Maureen Glaude

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Julie Adams on 05/17/06 at 03:58 PM

I think this is GREAT! I love the succint commentary, probing ideas that make you ponder, not unlike a haiku in that context...the sequence is poignant and effective, the last line punches...thanks for sharing this, peace always, *jewels*

Posted by Chris Sorrenti on 05/17/06 at 06:31 PM

I think this would make a great opening poem to a short story or maybe one of those Danielle Steel romance novels...maybe someday a Maureen Glaude romance novel???

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