| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Ashok Sharda on 05/14/06 at 03:22 AM yes, graduating on this evolutionary ladder.Subtle. |
| Posted by Chris Sorrenti on 05/14/06 at 12:19 PM I like how this can be interpreted in at least a couple of different ways; loss of innocense...virginity maybe, but certainly a defining moment of growing up. Nice one David. |
| Posted by Charles E Minshall on 05/17/06 at 03:52 AM Funtastic Dave...Charlie |
| Posted by Jim Benz on 05/17/06 at 03:20 PM I haven't been commenting hardly at all on poetry here for awhile, but I have to make an exceptions here. this little ku is exactly what I look for in a haiku, so ripe with meaning and image that its just bursting. having watched the cherry blossoms outside my front door fade and fall just a few weeks ago, this also creates the seasonal element for me extremely well. incredible ku David. |
| Posted by Julie Adams on 05/18/06 at 10:51 PM just lovely...you belong on the top rated list...well done again, peace, *jewels* |
| Posted by Julie Adams on 05/18/06 at 10:52 PM PS: Congrats! |
| Posted by Tony Whitaker on 06/06/07 at 09:14 AM Superb! There is so much that may be read into this beautiful Ku. Into my favorites with you! |
