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Reality
by Kristi Paiki picture you in the sun
wondering how the hell
it all went wrong
and falling down on your knees
praying for some kind of sympathy
i know i would apologize
if i looked into your eyes
being caught in between
what i wish for and what i see
it seems....
Good intentions are not enough to get me through today...or this life. 05/07/2006 Posted on 05/08/2006
Copyright © 2024 Kristi Paik
| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Joan Serratelli on 05/08/06 at 11:11 AM The last line of this piece is so real to me and ties the entire poem together. Excellent write and thought ful read- good job! |
| Posted by Christina Bruno on 05/12/06 at 05:11 AM the last line really capture the poem :) |
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