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erotiku: the shower

by Jim Benz

your smile
under half closed eyes
mewing

***

hot water
warming your breasts
beneath my lips

***

skin so tingly
where the soap doesn't go
I go

***

in the shower
hands against the wall
an invitation

***

slippery
beneath the water
two bodies merging


05/05/2006

Posted on 05/05/2006
Copyright © 2024 Jim Benz

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Kristi Paik on 05/05/06 at 03:15 PM

sensitive and sexy all at once. Nicely done :)

Posted by Chris Sorrenti on 05/05/06 at 04:15 PM

Superb! And now I think I need a shower...cold that is. Kinda difficult when you're at work. :o)

Posted by Elizabeth Jill on 05/06/06 at 05:10 AM

erotiku: newd formation poetry.

Ku do's for you! (with terrycloth all over!)
B@thing in sensuality!

Posted by Quentin S Clingerman on 10/07/07 at 01:35 PM

Sensual but in good taste. Brings back memories that an old widower like myself must not dwell on! LOL!!

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