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Daddy's Girl

by Kristi Paik

My little sister called out your name last night in her sleep
(do you remember her? Your favorite mistake?)
She misses you; as much as we all should combined

I could forgive you for the lies
I could forgive you for making me stay up
all those sleepless nights
I could forgive you for making me cry
I could forgive the fact that I will never
truly trust any one ‘cause of you
But…why?

Even now, all grown up Daddy
I am still not your girl
You see me
And pretend to care


It’s cool Daddy
I understand it will never work here
‘Cause even when you’re near
I feel…
so far away from you.

I watched you swim today Daddy
Your backstroke, your butterfly,
Your perfect Australian crawl

I always thought I was drowning in that
Icy water between us
Maybe, just maybe
You were moving too slow to save me.

05/04/2006

Posted on 05/04/2006
Copyright © 2024 Kristi Paik

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Joan Serratelli on 05/04/06 at 07:47 PM

This piece really touched me. It reminds me of my daughter relationship with her father- you described it perfectly in the last stanza- so sad. Very heartfelt and hard write, and very tough read! SO well done.

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