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by Vere Mantratriad

and I whisper to myself
"baby, you are so
                                        out the box
that you'll never get free"

05/03/2006

Posted on 05/03/2006
Copyright © 2024 Vere Mantratriad

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Elizabeth Jill on 05/05/06 at 04:38 AM

[] [] [] [] [] ~ this poem flies!

Posted by Anne Boulender on 05/29/06 at 12:12 AM

yeah thats kind of rock and roll in a way.

Posted by Kyle Anne Kish on 09/30/06 at 05:14 PM

Vere, so few words but says so much. I love not only the poem, but the format as well. :)

Posted by Jolie Jordan on 01/21/15 at 12:25 AM

Yes.

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