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Another day another tear

by Tony Young

So strange but still
I expect to see and hear
your close, I know
but of late, my show
and almost fear
I smile and talk
so many memories
my words not heard for
they are but my thoughts
as I walk the deep weir
wondering why
your there I'm here
my smile is but the
of my face and lips
as are my words
my writings in the sky
your name
my fingertips
darkness falls
this is my fear
for the early morning light
is sure to bring
another day
another tear


Posted on 05/01/2006
Copyright © 2022 Tony Young

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Joan Serratelli on 05/01/06 at 08:25 PM

Quite beautiful-loved the vivid images used. Very lovely and sad write- good job Tony and Welcome to Pathetic!

Posted by Joe Cramer on 05/02/06 at 09:05 PM

Well done... and welcome!

Posted by Joan Serratelli on 05/07/06 at 05:57 PM

To the top 10 in a week? Wonderful work Tony!

Posted by Chris Sorrenti on 11/16/06 at 03:17 PM

Forlorn but beautiful piece of writing, easily tugs on the heart strings Tony.

Posted by Dave Fitzgerald on 08/29/08 at 01:52 PM

Congratulations on POTD Tony!

Posted by Joe Cramer on 08/29/08 at 08:55 PM

Congrats on POTD... well deserved!!! (I can't believe that it was over two years ago that I first read this poem!?!)

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