by Joan Serratelli

They would be together
until the end of time
Being apart was
far too painful
They had tried that
(more than once)

They had gone through
so much together
weathered every storm
(too many to count)

They would choose
to go on as one
Die in each other's arms
(til death never would they part)


Posted on 04/30/2006
Copyright © 2021 Joan Serratelli

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Kristina Woodhill on 04/30/06 at 03:07 PM

"they would choose to go on as one" - this poem speaks of years together, decisions made, resolve, and maturity.

Posted by Anne Engelen on 05/01/06 at 11:28 AM

What a wonderful choice they made! What a beautiful tender picture you've painted. Most enjoyable read.

Posted by Tony Young on 05/02/06 at 06:46 AM

"until the end of time" and assuming more storms are to follow. Love this little tangle Joan

Posted by Gregory O'Neill on 04/08/10 at 06:36 PM

Our liberation is bound up with once another anyway, so honor the commitment and celebrate the togetherness! Nice, Joan! Thanks.

Posted by Jessica Polanco on 04/14/10 at 07:21 AM

this is so amazingly beautiful! it evoked so many emotions, today i am in love with this poem! and i am in love with your eloquence and brilliance . much applause is well earned for you!

Posted by Kristina Woodhill on 04/14/10 at 06:53 PM

Congrats on POTD!

Posted by Gregory O'Neill on 04/14/10 at 09:13 PM

Good for you, Joan! Happy potd!

Posted by Joe Cramer on 04/14/10 at 09:56 PM

... congrats on POTD!!!!!

Posted by Elizabeth Jill on 04/14/10 at 11:13 PM

Hey! POTD! how cool!

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