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~Together~

by Joan Serratelli

They would be together
until the end of time
~Because~
Being apart was
far too painful
They had tried that
(more than once)

They had gone through
so much together
~And~
weathered every storm
(too many to count)

They would choose
to go on as one
~And~
Die in each other's arms
(til death never would they part)

04/30/2006

Posted on 04/30/2006
Copyright © 2021 Joan Serratelli

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Kristina Woodhill on 04/30/06 at 03:07 PM

"they would choose to go on as one" - this poem speaks of years together, decisions made, resolve, and maturity.

Posted by Anne Engelen on 05/01/06 at 11:28 AM

What a wonderful choice they made! What a beautiful tender picture you've painted. Most enjoyable read.

Posted by Tony Young on 05/02/06 at 06:46 AM

"until the end of time" and assuming more storms are to follow. Love this little tangle Joan

Posted by Gregory O'Neill on 04/08/10 at 06:36 PM

Our liberation is bound up with once another anyway, so honor the commitment and celebrate the togetherness! Nice, Joan! Thanks.

Posted by Jessica Polanco on 04/14/10 at 07:21 AM

this is so amazingly beautiful! it evoked so many emotions, today i am in love with this poem! and i am in love with your eloquence and brilliance . much applause is well earned for you!

Posted by Kristina Woodhill on 04/14/10 at 06:53 PM

Congrats on POTD!

Posted by Gregory O'Neill on 04/14/10 at 09:13 PM

Good for you, Joan! Happy potd!

Posted by Joe Cramer on 04/14/10 at 09:56 PM

... congrats on POTD!!!!!

Posted by Elizabeth Jill on 04/14/10 at 11:13 PM

Hey! POTD! how cool!

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