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Let's do some drugs...
by Kristi Paik..and fall in love
...while the world turns
i love you ...i really do
and it's forever man
Let's have sex on X...
...and make a mess
in the Miata...
and do the cha-cha
Mesmerized on Mushrooms...
...I hear music
a brand new tune...
High on Hash...
....and now out of cash
...fuck it though...
it's been a blast! 04/25/2006 Posted on 04/25/2006
Copyright © 2024 Kristi Paik
| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Rula Shin on 04/25/06 at 06:49 PM This has a nice rhythm and rhyme and does express the sensations vividly, but well, we all live in the realities we create for ourselves subconsciously by remaining deep asleep and dreaming. In the end life becomes one big simulation emmulating LIFE. We occupy this non-existant realm, happily calling the simulation LIFE, and many of us never waking up to SEE. |
| Posted by Ashok Sharda on 04/26/06 at 12:16 AM Yes, No one likes drugs. Its always the 'devil weed' or the 'peyote' or is it 'mescalito'who falls in love with us once we give him a chance.The Dog turned God. |
| Posted by Christina Bruno on 04/28/06 at 02:08 AM i think this piece is pretty cool, i like the flow and how it relates :) |
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