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by Jim Benz

every night for weeks
you labored over white silk
as your belly grew
now, twenty two years later
your face still wears the same smile

04/17/2006

Author's Note: included as part of a Dance/Spokenword/Music performance at Bloomington Art Center

Posted on 04/18/2006
Copyright © 2020 Jim Benz

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Gregory O'Neill on 04/18/06 at 02:17 AM

Holy smokes, Jim...this is quite the keeper, alright. Congrats on the words, and the years!

Posted by Kristina Woodhill on 04/18/06 at 02:19 AM

Such a loving observation marrying past and present.

Posted by Peter Humphreys on 04/18/06 at 07:38 AM

This is a love song as beautiful as white silk. Thank you, Jim.

Posted by Joan Serratelli on 04/18/06 at 11:08 AM

Short, but sweet. This says so much in so few wirds. Lovely!

Posted by Elizabeth Jill on 04/18/06 at 03:43 PM

Oh how pure silk of love, Jim! How beautiful these few and simple words...you are poetry.

Posted by Ashok Sharda on 04/21/06 at 04:51 PM

A beautiful tribute to a companion.

Posted by Rula Shin on 04/21/06 at 04:59 PM

And though words lack the depth of this meaningful relationship, here you have done it justice through them. Beautiful.

Posted by Quentin S Clingerman on 10/07/07 at 01:27 PM

Amazingly simple, yet so profound!

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