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WHEN I SAY I LOVE YOU by W. Mahlon PurdinWhen I say I love you,
It's not me and it's not you,
It's not just love. It's
You and me, and
What we've done together.
Love can be those springtimes
When in each other's arms
We whiled away the wisps
Of youth as though forever
We were young.
Love can be those hard times
When we stared at each other
And saw the darkness
In our souls and the days
Of sad drudgery.
Love can be the child
Who came bursting in
And changed everything
From just you and me to
Something so much more.
Love could be the smoothing
Out of roughness and of toughness
Into a soothing happy
Day-to-day agreement that
Things are as they always will be.
Love could be the deep draw
Of breath, almost a sigh,
Of relief that so much is
Past, and peacefulness
Fills our days.
But when I say I love you,
It's all of those and more.
It's not me. It's not you.
It's not just love. It's
Life.
When I say I love you,
It's embracing the world
That we are walking through
Stanza after stanza
Holding hands. 02/14/2006 Posted on 02/14/2006 Copyright © 2026 W. Mahlon Purdin
| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Maria Massarella on 02/16/08 at 08:41 AM Allora! ... how could so precious a lovepoem be uncommented ... though in truth it does silence one for the beautiful it is! like the morning sun that arises to embrace the day ... so does the warm wonder of this 'I love you' poem embrace the world and all the hearts in it. I am gratitudefilled to find this in my day. Congratulations! Grazie* for this POTD ...*m.a |
| Posted by Anne Engelen on 02/16/08 at 09:44 AM What an amazing POTD. Lucky are the ones that find such true love in life. The lost stanza sums it up so nicely. Beautiful! |
| Posted by Kristina Woodhill on 02/16/08 at 03:43 PM Congrats on POTD! This is a lifetime of love and understanding what it means. The last two stanzas are such a strong finish. |
| Posted by Kristine Briese on 02/16/08 at 05:26 PM So sweet and romantic; what a fulfilling relationship. Excellent POTD. |
| Posted by Wendy Sparling on 02/16/08 at 09:16 PM Beautifully written poem about love. I would love to be the receiver of this fine poem. Congrats on your POTD! |
| Posted by George Hoerner on 02/17/08 at 12:27 AM Great POTD! Very nicely said and I love the lost stanzas. Congratulations. |
| Posted by Alison McKenzie on 02/17/08 at 12:41 AM This is just a perfect way to describe love, and I adore it!!! Congratulations on a very delightful POTD!!! |
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