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Posted by Maureen Glaude on 02/14/06 at 02:57 PM not the first time you've been called that. This is like a lovely Valentine to God and to our craft at the same time. A treasure well worth unearthing for us indeed. A keeper, a new favourite for me too, like Maria. |
Posted by Elizabeth Jill on 02/15/06 at 04:45 PM A prayer deep inside I've whispered to God, only not with the humble eloquence of your poems. Thank you for the gift of finding words. They surround me with gentle quietness before God.
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Posted by Gregory O'Neill on 02/15/06 at 05:35 PM Inspired Chris, high marks all across! Well said. |
Posted by Mara Meade on 02/15/06 at 09:23 PM I can only say "amen." |
Posted by Charles E Minshall on 02/16/06 at 01:44 PM I too must say amen Chris. Goes into my favorites list....Charlie |
Posted by Michelle Angelini on 02/17/06 at 07:58 PM Methinks your prayers have been answered. The humility in these words speaks of service and I think the sword has touched your shoulders.
~Chelle~ |
Posted by JD Clay on 02/18/06 at 05:43 PM Your scabbard overflows with wisdom and divine. Break out the scaffold, Sir, this artful piece belongs in the Dome of Sistine.
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Posted by Quentin S Clingerman on 02/19/06 at 09:59 PM Depth of desire with the very human uncertainty expressed with a wonderful directness and passion. |
Posted by Joan Serratelli on 03/24/09 at 01:53 PM This is a beautiful prayer- too many great lines to quote. LOVED the entire piece! I'm putting this in my favorites! |