Member Comments on this Poem |
Posted by Maureen Glaude on 02/14/06 at 11:38 PM very intense capture of the process. I like the slant rhyme with plush and touch. Wonderful. Kind of ominous. |
Posted by Elizabeth Jill on 02/15/06 at 04:57 PM I am immersed in especially the last three moments of this. You are priceless in your creative moves and surprising turns-of-phrase, Kristina. § Beautiful, this, and sadness inside some where, I feel it. |
Posted by Kathleen Wilson on 02/01/07 at 05:13 PM I am so happy to have discovered this little gem of yours. Shower stall/human body shaped, the form flows like water, who in some sense may be seen as the "you" of ultimate cleansing (as well as time itself, and earth). The restraint and elegance here so worthy of the topic, as of a framed miniature, or a 15th century lyric. A favorite of one who loves to swim in this! |
Posted by Corey Lockaby on 05/20/07 at 05:03 AM I like this very much. The cycle, of cleaning mildew but knowing that you must succumb your own body to it in the end. Poetic in the truest sense. |
Posted by Don Matley on 09/20/07 at 02:19 PM I agree with Reen's comment. A sqeaky clean effort. A great tribute and capture of inevitability! |
Posted by Joan Serratelli on 02/23/09 at 02:37 PM This piece is so good! I can definely relate to the showering proceess and all the metaphors involved in this piece. Great piece- one everyone canpicture- great imagry- great write |