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ABC Girl

by Rebecca Lin

Take away the smile,
the jewelry and the lace.
Take away your smart remarks,
the makeup on your face.

Eliminate all her compliments,
erase all her friends.
Destroy the inside jokes,
believe that she's pretend.

You say you're just an
average teenager,
expecting to still sound great,
but dear you really are
like all the rest...
there is no mistake.

Your riven lips,
your hair shredded and grey....
This is you, blind-folded,
every fucking day.

Your reassurance is gone,
but be reassured now:
If I take away your beauty,
you're nothing but a
rancid clown.

02/11/2006

Posted on 02/12/2006
Copyright © 2024 Rebecca Lin

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Max Phineas on 02/13/06 at 06:24 PM

This is an incredible work!!! And so true.

Posted by Chris Sorrenti on 02/14/06 at 05:05 AM

Powerful piece of work. Anger and truth carefully directed and sharp as a laser beam.

Posted by Mo Couts on 07/04/11 at 09:37 PM

Sadly, so many of those girls ARE all the same and you've expressed that here so awesomely.

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