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Blue

by Keith D Allison

Down in the valley
Down so down
In the valley’s so low

The little girl dancing
Her heart a glow
She has, her new man

Upon the table
The golden band
The promise forsaken

The starlight clean
The circle pure
Echoing in vacant dreams

The guitar beats
In moaning of blues
Just another worthless man

Down in the valley
Down so down
In the valley’s so low

The blues moving
The guitar bleeds grief
Juice and pain

Oh baby, you done me wrong
Just another heart
Fighting to survive

02/02/2006

Posted on 02/02/2006
Copyright © 2022 Keith D Allison

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Chris Sorrenti on 02/02/06 at 03:20 PM

Pretty good Keith, coherent, and has great flow. A new favorite for me of yours. Kudos!

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