Blue by Keith D Allison Down in the valley Down so down In the valley’s so low The little girl dancing Her heart a glow She has, her new man Upon the table The golden band The promise forsaken The starlight clean The circle pure Echoing in vacant dreams The guitar beats In moaning of blues Just another worthless man Down in the valley Down so down In the valley’s so low The blues moving The guitar bleeds grief Juice and pain Oh baby, you done me wrong Just another heart Fighting to survive 02/02/2006 Posted on 02/02/2006 Copyright © 2024 Keith D Allison Member Comments on this Poem Posted by Chris Sorrenti on 02/02/06 at 03:20 PM Pretty good Keith, coherent, and has great flow. A new favorite for me of yours. Kudos! Return to the Previous Page   pathetic.org Version 7.3.2 May 2004 Terms and Conditions of Use 0 member(s) and 2 visitor(s) online All works Copyright © 2024 their respective authors. Page Generated In 0 Second(s)