| Posted by Soulo Jacob Bourgeau on 01/28/06 at 05:48 AM First, the series title rocks. The use of 'quill' when discussing addiction gives me an image of a needle. Also, 'indulge my senses' is appropriate here. Like much poetry, haiku could be spoken, but seeing it on the page really extends the medium. Stimulating on many levels. |
| Posted by Robin Patterson on 01/30/06 at 03:08 AM I like the last line the best...it is a strange addiction isn't it...especially those little nagging haiku's that wake you from sleep and by day you struggle to remember them as "perfect" as when they drifted into your dreamstate?...and when you do, it's like you said, "a poetic fix" :) Robin |
